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Shumiliany by AbrilTheMareep Shumiliany by AbrilTheMareep
Abril's final Form: Shumiliany the Key of Madness

:iconfinallyplz: My tablet is on fire. Don't know how much time I've been doing this...

:bulletpink:More of Abril, or Shumi, or how ever you want to call her: [link]

:star: This character belongs to Sonic Cake :star:

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Ok, you know i love you, but im gonna be completely professional with this. :p

Alright then, The visual is very great here, She really stands out and the dark background also brings out the color of her outfit as well that shine she has to her. Her eyes seem more sad then crazy, like how you told me they were suppose to be. but the sadness actually makes her seem better here where you could use Crazyness for Darius.

I like how she's floating like this is the beginning of her discovering this new power. I give you the 5 stars for the originality, mainly because of the design for the dress.. It's really incredible and really freakin long though.

Technique is only a 4.5 mainly because her legs are really long.. They're practically longer her her whole body. that's my only thing that caught my attention with that. But it's a simple fix.. sorta. XD But overall the whole style of the dress, the trimmings Her eyes, and even her hair were by far one of your greatest ones so far. :D You've improved so much!

the Impact is also another 5 stars, mainly because in her eyes, you can see sadness and even some pain in there.. And it just makes you want to jump in there and save her. :3 The see through parts of the dress is also good too as well as the part that wraps around the see through part. XD But It's really good and definately impacts people when they see this.

So overall, i'd definately give this a 5 whole stars! :D you've improved so much my love and this is definately your best work so far. :D Congrats and everything you've done, keep going and i know for sure you'll make your dreams come true love. :3
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Bueno empecemos
Trato de ver errores cual no veo nada El fondo es hermoso el vestido me parece muy detallado con muchas lineas y sombras que constatan el color del vestido es hermoso el movimiento del cabello me recuerda a tus fips (cual me encantan) Ahora si me impresionaste este y muchos de tus demás dibujos me han encantado por tu impresionable imagnacion y forma de ver las cosas.
No se como le isiste para que en la capa invisible se mostraran los pies de la mareep eso es lo que me impresiono de tu dibujo espero que me sorprendas mas por que realmente eres una artista impresionante

Ally. Itzune tokoni
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purplelover100 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lovely :D
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delvallejoel Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
She's beautiful.
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Husky106 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it! its absolutly amazing!!!!
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KawaiiMae Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I love this design!
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alicetheredpanda Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow
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Xssys Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OH WOW. :wow:
Now this is stunning! :heart:
Just the detail on the on the ends of the dress :O_o: ... the spot effects, the blending in colours... :faint:
So beautiful :iconloveloveplz:
Great job you've done here, keep it up! :tighthug: <3
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GenesisTheCartoonist Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
Está hermoso el Vestido, Mis felicidades, Gran Artista :D
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Crystal-The-Wolf1015 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:'D its so beautiful!!! TTuTT you did an awesome job
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Ruby-the-skunk Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely picture! The dress looks fabulous and it's beautifully set. Hair looks great too. Love her sensitive eyes. There is so peaceful feeling inside this pic. So eye-catching ;)
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SonicSatamX93 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Writer
She's beautifully drawn.

Great job.
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